1、长短句交叉;
2、使用插入语;
3、用词是否多样、准确、形象尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词;
4、关键词是否换用切勿老用重复词;
5、句型使用是否准确、地道。
下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项
1.适当用被动替换主动这样能更客观地反映事实。句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. )
举个经典结尾的例子It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing soits competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.
2.善于使用插入语比如说把副词、连接词等作为插入语放在中间一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后两边分别加上逗号。 如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间一般放在动词、助动词后两边分别加上逗号。举例如下 Other individuals, however, take the attitude that ?
3.一定要学会换词换形象具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think, people,
opinion 等等)比如第一条的例子中applicable替换proper; approaches替换ways;implement替换carry out;
sharpen one’s competitive edge替换enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)。
下面举一篇某位同学写的优秀作文的例子看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法精彩替换和句型都用上了作文有了很大的提高。I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that I indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.
exceedingly 替换 very;(个人认为替换成overwhelmingly更出彩)
thrilling 替换 exciting;
sth. exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb. be interested in sth;
google 替换 search;
an army of 替换 a lot of。
The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情;
Increasing popularity 替换 more and more popular;
Coincident with ? 非常地道的句型表达“与?一致”的意思替换 With ?;
Advancement 替换 development;
Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )替换 enter into;
Current ( currently )替换 now;
Appeal to sb. 替换 sb. be interested in sth.;
Growing individuals 替换 more and more people;
It is no exaggeration to say 经典句型 说某事是毫不夸张的。(it goes wthout exaggeration that更好)For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.
For a start 替换 To begin with;
We can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法;
our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被动;
Additionally 替换 In addition / Besides;
Deliver 替换 send。
There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way,especially the growing violence ,porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to e is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings,
这个句子有三个精彩之处
首先There is no denying that这个句型;
其次however作为插入语;
再次function in the disservice of 替换 do harm to。
Emerging 替换 appearing ( fading 替换 disappearing );
Net citizen 网民属于精彩用词。(直接用 netizen更好)
As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.
No garden has no weeds 替换 Every coin has two sides;
Computers do play 使用do 表示强调;
Positive 替换 important / good 等;
A slice of 替换 a part of;
Unfavorable 替换 bad;
Impacts 替换 effects / influences;
We should, therefore, take advantage of ? 使用插入语;
Fruits (而且fruits 用的非常形象
merits/ virtues) 替换 advantage ( defects 替换 disadvantage ) ;
Facet 替换 aspect。
以下是45个最经典的替换词各位同学可以参考一下:
31. next to / virtually impossible替换nearly / almost impossible.
rding/concerning 替换about.
ial/paramount 替换important.
35. assiduous替换hard-working
36. arduous替换difficult
rdeveloped/financially-challenged 替换poor(因为poor通常含有贬义)
38. demonstrate /manifest 替换show
39. invariably 替换always
40. perilous/hazardous替换dangerous(写社会类作文时常用说什么社会现象是不好的有害的)
41. formidable 替换difficult
42. quintessential 替换typical(举例时常用例如a quintessential example should be cited that=for example; for instance)
43. distinguished 替换famous
44. feasible替换possible
45. consequently, accordingly替换so
作文同义替换词以及最新的2013年考研信息希望对各位考生有所帮助。
动词(词组)1. absorb->assimilate 吸收
agree partly->agree with reserve 有保留地赞同
arouse->ignite/stimulate/spur/motivate 引起;鼓励
devote to->dedicate to 把??奉献于;专注于
emphasize->accentuate 强调
expect->anticipate 期望;预期
get into chaos->with chaos ensuing 陷入混乱
hand in->render 提出
limit->stress/hinder/hamper 限制;阻止;阻碍
operate->manipulate 操作;操纵
publicize->propagandize 宣传公布繁荣(的)(词性不同注意使用正确形式)
sway->vacillate 影响;摇摆使摇摆
think->contemplate/muse/meditate/retrospect 思考考虑
thrive->palmy(a.)/flourishing(v./a.)/prosperity(n.)
undermine->sap/enervate/debilitate 破坏;使衰弱衰竭
use->utilize 使用;利用
2. 形容词/副词
hurt->vulnerable 受伤的;易受攻击的
inevitable-indispensable 必然的;不可缺少的
in fact->actually/virtually 事实上;实际上(ad.)
key->crucial/vital/consequential 关键的;重要的
large->miraculous/marvelous 大的;不可思议的(表程度)
obvious->conspicuous 明显的;显著的
proper->apposite 适当的;合适的
persuasive->thorough/sound/specific/convincing 有说服力的
true->accurate 正确的;准确的
vague->gratuitous/unwarranted/oversimplified 模糊的
3. 名词(词组)
bias->prejudice/discriminate 偏见;歧视
character->trait/individuality/idiosyncrasy/personality 品质;特性;个性child->juvenile 孩子;青少年
clash->conflict/collision/rencounter 冲突
custom->convention/tradition 传统;习俗
delegate->representative 代表
detail->specific 细节
lawmaking->legislation 立法
offspring->descendant 后代;子孙
value->merit 价值4. 其他
although->albeit/notwithstanding 尽管(conj.)
but->nonetheless/nevertheless 然而;但是(conj.)
through->in term of/via 通过(prep.)
physical health 生理健康
mental fitness 心理健康
keep optimistic保持乐观
pessimistic 悲观的
commit suicide 自杀
do physical exercises 进行体育锻炼
junk food 垃圾食品
well-balanced diet 均衡饮食
infectious diseases 传染病
despise 轻视，鄙视
anxiety 焦虑；渴望；挂念
disturbed 扰乱的
envious 嫉妒
admire 钦佩
esteem 尊重
grieved 伤心的
impatient 没有耐心的
courteous 礼貌
diligent 勤奋
generation gap 代沟
the old/aged/elders/elderly, senior citizens 老年人
independence 独立
doting care 溺 爱
spoil 溺 爱
persistence 坚 持
success 成 功
Achievement 成就 成功
conquer 征服
surmount 克服，越过；战胜
triumph 胜利
acquire 获得
attainment 成就
innovation 创新
striving spirit 奋斗精神
spirit 拼搏精神
striving spirit 奋斗精神
spirit 拼搏精神
determined
outlook of life 人生观
difficulty 困难
challenge挑战
confidence 信心
crisis 危机
employment 就业
cooperation/teamwork 合作
team spirit 团队精神
pursue 追求
satisfy 满足
thirsty for 渴望
yearn for 渴望
bravery勇气
indulge 放任，纵容
inspire 鼓舞
stimulate 激励
tolerate 容忍
contaminate 污染
environmental protection 环境保护
keep ecological balance 保持生态平衡
sustainable development strategy 可持续发展战略 save the energy 节约能源（节能）
reduce the emission of greenhouse gases 减少温室气体排放（减排） greenhouse effect 温室效应
clean renewable energy 清洁可再生能源
low carbon economy 低碳经济
disaster 灾难
catastrophe 灾难
deforestation 滥 砍 滥 伐
desertification 沙 漠 化
water and soil erosion 水土流失
sandstorm 沙 尘 暴
snowstorm 雪 灾
typhoon 台 风
flood 洪 水
earthquake 地震
责任：duty/responsibility
shoulder/assume/undertake责任感
sense of responsibility义务与责任
逃避：avoid/shun/shirk
奉献：devote/devotion/dedicate/dedication
职业道德：professional ethics
欺诈行为：dishonest behaviors
伪劣产品：fake commodities
虐待：abuse
错误 mistreat, maltreat, ill-treat(ment)
赡养：do good to, care, look after, take care of, financially support
转趋势：reverse the trend
cultural exchange 文化交流
cultural integration/blending 文化融合
multi-culture, mosaic culture, pluralistic culture 多元文化
preserve and cherish 保存珍惜
absorb its essence 取 其 精 华
Cross-cultural 跨 文 化 的
cultural differences 文化差异
diversity 多样性
tradition 传统
treasure 财富
civilization 文明
mainstream 主流
diploma 学历 学位证书
去其糟粕：resist its dark side
偶像崇拜：idol worship
学术抄袭：academic plagiarism
上网成瘾：web addiction
数码产品：digital products 电子游戏：electronic games
手机入网：mobile-phone subscription 手机短信：text message
电子媒体: electronic media
大 众 媒 体 : mass media
流 行 文 化 ： popular culture 反智主义: anti-intellectualism