经典英文自荐信点评

第一篇:经典的英文求职信点评

经典英文自荐信点评

job application

may 22nd

dear mr. cavendish,

i saw your advertisement in the local paper this evening,and i wonder if you would consider me for a job as a waiter this summer.

i am seventeen years old and at present i am studying english and economics. when i leave school, i hope to take a course in hotel management. during the school holidays last summer, i worked as a waiter at the central hotel. the headwaiter there, mr. macintosh, will be pleased to send you a recommendation for me.

i would prefer to work in your hotel in filey because it is near my home. however, if there isn’t any job there for me, perhaps you could consider me for the scarborough hotel.

i would be pleased if you will send me information about the pay and conditions of the job to be offered. i will be free to begin work in the fourth week of july when the school holidays start.

yours sincerely,

peter tuck

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行文点评

这是一封范例的求职信。第一段开门见山,表明写信的目标是求职。同时,也注明了消息起源和应聘职位。第二段开端介绍求职者的情况,(注意:所写的情况最好能体现出你十分合适所应聘的职位)。信中第三段特别陈述了一个不情之请并阐明原因。最后一段表明自己盼望得到回复,并阐明自己可以开端工作的具体时间。

这封信符合求职信的结构请求,语言简洁,语气礼貌慷慨。

好文妙译

求职信

亲爱的卡文迪斯先生:

我在今晚的处所报纸上看到了你们的广告,我想在这个夏天做一份服务生的工作,敬请考虑。

我十七岁,现在正在学习英文和经济学。毕业后,我盼望能够学习酒店管理课程。去年暑假时,我在中央酒店作服务生。那儿的领班麦金托什先生会很乐意向您寄交一封关于我的推荐信。

我比较爱好在您的费雷酒店工作,因为那儿离我家不远。但如果那儿没有我的工作机会,也许您可以考虑让我去斯卡伯勒酒店。

如果您能寄给我有关这份工作的薪水和工作环境的一些信息,我会非常高兴。我可以从七月的第四个星期开端工作,那时学校开端放假了。 

彼得·塔克

5月22日

词汇考虑

recommendation n.推荐,介绍

思如泉涌

will, work and wait are the pyramidal cornerstones for success. 意志、工作和等候是成功的基石。

a good beginning makes a good ending. 善始者必善其终。

第二篇:经典英文自荐信

英文自荐信例文,仅供参考。

dear sir,

i wish to apply for the position of deputy editor advertised in dated 19 june, 2014.

i have had considerable editorial experience and am familiar with proofreading, rewriting, and productions, as well as the more creative aspects of this type of work. i should like to summarize briefly my experience:

1997-2014

for three years i was employed as senior editor on an xyz weekly magazine having a circulation of about 80,000. here i did a great deal of original writing, wrote the headlines, and worked directly with the printer in setting up the paper.

1997-1993

i also worked as assistant editor on a monthly newsletter in xxx, a voluntary organization, where my tasks were similar to those described above, but also included a great deal of interviewing and personal contact with people from all walks of life.

i was graduated from cde university in 1993 with honors, after three years of attendance in the evening session, while working full-time during the day. i majored in ommmunciation and am continuing my studies in this field at present at abc university, where i expect to receive my master's degree next summer.

i shall be able to call for an interview at your convenience, and shall be able to supply any necessary or examples of my previous work.

yours truly

haoword

第三篇:经典英文自荐信模板五篇

p.o. box 36 biit university beijing,china 100000

dear sir/madam:

are you searching for a telecommunications manager with expertise in project management and team leadership?

i specialize in creating and implementing high-performance strategies that directly impact growth and profitability of large telecommunications companies. in addition to my knowledge of business processes, i also offer proficiency in telecom software development and cutting-edge technologies.

i am relocating to shenzhen and would be interested in opportunities with your firm. currently, i serve as manager for bit company's information industry division. briefly, some of my accomplishments include:

developed a tool to track and forecast price,quantity,and revenue, which enables client to monitor business performance

implemented a customized end-to-end testing process and sql database

my business acumen, technical expertise, and leadership capabilities have contributed to a number of successful projects. the enclosed resume outlines my credentials and accomplishments in greater detail. i would welcome an opportunity to meet with you for a personal interview.

sincerely,

gu bin

april 13,2014

p.o. box 36

tsinghua university

beijing,china 100084

dear sir/madam:

your advertisement for a network maintenance engineer in the april 10 student daily interested me bacause the position that you described sounds exactly like the kind of job i am seeking.

according to the advertisement ,your position requires top university,bachelor or above in computer science or equivalent field and proficient in windows nt4.0 and linux system. i feel that i am competent to meet the requirements. i will be graduating from graduate school of tsinghua university this year with a m.s. degree . my studies have included courses in computer control and management and i designed a control simulation system developed with microsoft visual interdev and sql server.

during my education, i have grasped the principals of my major and skills of practice. not only have i passed cet-6, but more important i can communicate with others freely in english. my ability to write and speak english is out of question.

i would appreciate your time in reviewing my enclosed resume and if there is any additional information you require, please contact me.i would welcome an opportunity to meet with you for a personal interview.

with many thanks,

wang lin

april 13,2014

room 212 building 343

tsinghua university,beijing 100084

ms. yang:

i was referred to you by mr. zhang, a partner with your beijing office, who informed me that the shanghai office of your company is actively seeking to hire quality individuals for your auditor program.

i have more than two years of accounting experience, including interning as an auditor last year with the beijing office of cccc. i will be receiving my mba this may from tsinghua university. i am confident that my combination of practical work experience and solid educational experience has prepared me for making an immediate contribution to your company. i understand the level of professionalism and communication required for long-term success in the field. my background and professional approach to business will provide your office with a highly productive auditor upon completion of your development program.

i will be in the shanghai area the week of april 16. please call me at 136001216901 to arrange a convenient time when we may meet to further discuss my background in relation to your needs. i look forward to meeting you then.

sincerely,

cheng dan

april 13,2014

p.o. box 36

biit university

beijing,china 100000

dear sir/madam:

now and then corporations send out feelers for just the right type of creative person. this person must fit very specific criteria. usually, after all is said and done, the corporation wants a business person who can manage, create and communicate. a seasoned professional who‘s been around for a while.

if you‘ve been looking for this rare combination of business savvy and design expertise, my background might interest you:

ten years of working experience. solid background in the management of creative up-and-comers.

know new technologies that show instant profit, such as cad/cam.

this is but a brief summary of my abilities. and there is much, much more to share.i feel i have strong marketable skills in which you would be interested. please contact me if you would like to hear and see more.

with many thanks,

huang yan

第四篇:英文自荐信英文自荐信

dear school leadership:

hello!

thank you for your loyalty in his busy schedule written through my job.

west tian-ling my name is anyang teachers college department of music 2014 music graduates professional.

four years in college, after persistent efforts, i have a relatively solid expertise. rise to the challenge of music theory, sight-singing, listening, vocal music teaching such courses. however, since the view that the inexperienced, lack of practical experience, hope to be able to gradually improve their work and give full play to its strengths as a school pitch in to help tim. in addition, i have anyang tutor over a period of time, have a certain amount of teaching ability. through the exercise, i deeply understand that a person must have good morals and virtue, a strong sense of professionalism and responsibility in order to face the difficulties and challenges.

in order to realize the value of your life for themselves for a good environment to display their talent, i sincerely hope to join your school. i believe that through their own efforts, your school will soon be capable of teaching.知遇之恩,没齿不忘, hoping you can give me a chance. if fortunate enough to become a member of your school, and i will cherish this hard-won opportunity for all teaching staff and schools together, solidarity, with the wisdom and sweat to create a better future school!

enclose my cv and contact details, sincerely look forward to the chance for an interview!

i wish you good health and good luck!

第五篇:英文自荐信英文自荐信

dear sir / ms:

hello! i wish to apply for your company in the newspapers to seek medical representative. i am confident that fits your business requirements.

in july of this year, i graduated from beijing medical college. the profession of clinical studies. through 3 years in school, master the basic medical knowledge, and has participated in a variety of practical activities in school organization.

i am a studious person, in college, has been awarded the scholarship, i also served as a member of publicity, with strong organizational and coordination capacity. i am a cheerful, enthusiastic person with strong communication skills. i firmly believe that: dedication and sense of responsibility to enable me to face any difficulties and challenges team.

today's healthcare industry is booming, i would like to join for china's medical cause and the development of your company to make its own contribution.

attached to the letter to my cv. if the opportunity to interview with you, i would be very grateful.

sincerely

salute